Thursday 21 February 2008

Day four: The ending of the start.

My eyes ached. I woke. There were bleak walls, and dainty cards strewn around a little table on my bedside. The hospital was pretty dull. My Mum was standing over me, tears sliding silently down her cheeks as she grasped my cold hand.
"WHAT?" I said, amazed. Mum never cried.
"You're alive."

This story was written by the best author ever. Please, fire-works clap!
Paki-paki whoooo!

6 comments:

Lyinda said...

where did u find ur character ghost thing from for kakepuku story cuse i cant find anytheing that i want on the internet!!!

Kitty Milo said...

wow! that is a really cool story i read all for parts of it. write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nei-Nei Neina-Marie said...

I can't, it's finnished!

mudpies02 said...

That was cool! it finished too quickly! I want more too!

jjdragonrider said...

Hi I'm a woodmonsta from Mr Woodys class this year. I absolutely love your story. It makes me want to read more!!!! :)

horseluva4 said...

Hi, I'm a woodmonsta from Mr Woody's class this year. I absolutely love your story, like Kitty Milo I want you to write more so I can read more but, the story is finished.